21 October 2014

2º ESO B: My weekend



               Hi i´m Fran and I go to tell you what I do on weekends.
               On Saturday´s usually I do my homeworks at the morning and in the afternoon I play computer games, but if I have a football match I get up early and I do the homeworks in evening.
               On Sunday´s I go to my grandparent´s home and I see a mortorcycle race, a car race or any football match. I eat paella and I return to my home. There, I prepare the backpack, I have a shower, I have dinner and I go to bed.

3 comments:

  1. Thank you Fran! Next time post it on time, please.
    Can anybody give him some feedback on his writing? I think you can still improve it.

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  2. I think that is a problem in the beggining of the text you said: I go to tell you what I..... and it's wrong because you are using the Present Continuous and you must to put: PERSON + TO BE + VERB + -ING: I'm going to tell you....

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  3. And you confuse There and Then, at the end of the text

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